a little repetitive, but preatty good.

thanks. yours are waaaay better than mine but I'm sure I'll get better.

well, I have been writing music with finale since seventh grade, so It is understandable. But this gives you limited choices,but I like my 6-6-7-8-10 combo with the bottom line(try it, it sounds like a solo, which it is)

this one has great play by the guitarist. lots of good blending of sound. I'd say it is my personal best by a long shot. #2 ---2---2---2---2---2---20--0---0---9---9---------9-----------1---8--1---1---8---0---0---0---04040---3-5-3-5-0---0---0---4---4-5-5-5-5-----1---1---1---a--1---1---a---0---0---a--------------------0--0---0---a---a---------a---

still kinda repetitive, but better. you are doing what I try not to do, which is have each of the instruments do a different riff at the same time, lookat this line from yours: 3---3---3---9 0---1---1---2 1---0---0---0 here is one from mine: 3---80-- 3-3-3-2--- 6-6-7-8-8 see the difference?

yeah I know but I'm just trying to make everything blend. I'll get better. Once I figure out how to use 6's and 7's better.

listen to the 6-6-7-8 thing. I found that, it sounds good. But that is all that I can fing, other that 7-8-7-8-8-, or 888-10---

I found a good combo with the 2nd instrument. 5-7-7-8-10. pretty close to the other one but sounds different. Here's my newest: #3 9--------3-0074040403---3---9---9-9---3---3-----3---3---3----1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-----9999-0---0---0---0---0---3-5-3-5-------0---0---0---5-7-7-8---a------------6--6---9-------a-------0---0---0---8-8-8-6-6-7-8-a---0---0----------0-------0---0---4-4-4-4-9---a--- the ending could be better but...

Dont try to have the bass(the second instrument) carry the melody. Always keep it in the third one. The ending was kinda good, but the cymbal thing was kinda bad. And with the 6-6-7-8- combo, listen to this one, and that is how to use it, like a solo: ------------9--9-9-9-9-6-9---2---3---80----3---89---6-2---82---6-4-5---------6-------------------b--b-b-b-b-b-b-----3-3-3-3-2---7-7-8---1---0--c---2---5-1---1---b--------6-6-7-8-a----6-6-7-8-8-8-a-------6-6-7-888-1---1---3-3-1---6-7-8-1-------3--6-6-7-8-a

showoff.

:lol:

My newest: #1 it's got some iffy parts but other than that... 9----3-3-3-7-----------3-4-9-----1--9--9---------------------9--4-4-9---1---1---19----0---0---2--3-3-8---8---c-------2---2---a--c-------------------8---8---0---1-c-c-c---a---0---0---3-3-8-8-8-8-a--1---1---4a2-a---5-3-3-7-5337-53357a-8-8-8-8-0---1-a-a-a---

I found a different site with the 'PunkOMatic' Here it is. http://onemorelevel.com/games.php?game=271

its ok.... Not the best, but kinda good.