Spartan Wars Discussion
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This is the first time I've ever done something like this so I realise it ain't that good but just leave your comments here. I'd appreciate anything you have to say, whether it's good or bad. Maybe you can talk about who your favorite character is so that I can put more of a spotlight on that character or something. Or you can PM me about any important events you want to happen or something so I can consider them...I dunno just post anything you have to say about the story on here.

okay I've decided on making a post here on a weekly basis or sooner. This one took 8 days cuz I'm still trying to get a feel for what I want to make different characters like. The leaders of Blue and Red teams haven't even been in the story yet except for Red's name being mentioned. But I just got a post up. It puts the spotlight on Blue, Green, and Silver. We find out how stupid a couple people are.

I noticed a couple more views on the RvBvSvG story. What did you guys think? Is there something I need to improve? cuz something doesn't seem quite right about it to me. and I don't know what it is...

I have to say that Fred and Sam weren't really that funny. I'm guessing for lots of quarrels 'tween them. same goes for Tyler and Gina. Silver Team is the funniest by far and the most featured team. Good job on them, Sharrakor! Are Brett and Red gonna be funny like Silver Team? stupid like Sam? or smart like...uhh...noone really...well, I guess Fred...

IRT JC-Brett's gonna be an okay leader. Not the best, but he's not gonna be totally lame like Big Ern is. Red's sorta similar to Big Ern though. Big, tough, and abusive of his position. But he won't be so irrational and has more sympathy for his fellow teammates. I'm glad you enjoyed Silver Team, they were definitely the ones I had the most fun with when creating them. They weren't featured in my last episode (sorry it took so long to update BTW) cuz they just weren't important to what was goin on. But they'll play a small role in the next one. I realise that Sam and Fred weren't that funny, but I'm mainly using Blue Team as setup characters, they're gonna be the ones that the storyline follows, but the humor will come with the other teams. Red Team is sorta like a cross between the Blues and the Silvers. I'm gonna be honest and say that I'm not quite sure how I'm gonna get them involved with the main story but...I'll tie them in sooner or later.

Well, I figured out a way to get the Reds involved with the main storyline...by adding another one. :D You shall soon see RvBvSvG: Sidewinder. I've finished the prologue but...I'm trying to get a feel for some of the characters in episode 1. So I'll post it up once I get finished with both the prologue AND the first episode.

wow, something tells me you've been feeling "inspired" these last few days or so. Even for you, that's alot of writing in one shot. Silver Team is by far my favorite of the four teams. Too bad about Manny and Big Ern, are they dead like Brett is? I'm interested in what happens to Nick tho since he's got nowhere to run and the Greens are right about to pounce on him. As for the Blues, I'm not sure where they'll end up. If I know you, they'll probly show up in Sidewinder. Let's see...as for where Gina went...I honestly have no clue. I think that the Reds are my least fave team tho so I'm not as speculative with them as I am about the others. I still wanna know what's up with the communications dude hanging up on Jessica when she asked about the Red Team. That was major foreshadowing to something, but my small brain can't comprehend what it is! lol. _____________________________________________________________ Now, for Sidewinder... I like the new addition of Sidewinder. Them guys are pretty cool. I actually prefer the Sidewinder story over the Blood Gulch one since there's more characters...Wilkes is an equivalent to Simmons, which has been obvious right from when Morris first complimented him. I like Morris tho, he's pretty cool. Shawn and Private Potter are hilarious...enough said. As for Vash, I don't know enough about him yet, but I'm getting Grif vibes from him. :P Green Team, they once again seem to be heavily involved with the storyline. Cuz in BG (Blood Gulch) , Jessica's communication with Green Command seemed to be a pretty important clue to what's going to be going on later in the story. And now in Sidewinder, there's five missing Greens, six of em left, but one was captured by Captain Morris and is a prisoner at their base...but is he still there or has he somehow escaped? Cuz I remember Morris assuring Wilkes that the prisoner would stay there, and if I know anything about how stupid most of those characters are, the prisoner will be gone when they get back. I hope Shawn's okay tho, I view him as a Church kind of person who has no authority, kind of funny just thinking about it. Silver Team...like I said, they're my faves. Corporal Petersen's situation could develop alot I think. You've definitely got something established there...Polowski's a good enough guy. He makes for a good leader, and I figure that having so many stupid characters would kind of ruin the story. Sands is alright, but probly the least interesting of the Silvers so far. I do like his comment about Boomstocker's farts tho, that was pretty funny. As for Boomstocker himself...I dunno. He's not that great of a character, but I can see him developing into something good. I mean, even the characters in Red vs Blue took a while to develop. Caboose was lame in the first few episodes, but then he became one of my fave characters of the whole series so...ya never know. Private Kelly, he's a rookie, and he's funny. I loved his introduction with Boomstocker totally bashing him. Once again, the Reds are my least fave. And they seem to be the least fave of the Silvers and Blues as well at Sidewinder so...but I don't really know much about the Reds at Sidewinder, other than Murphy and Polowski have bumped into each other in the past, and that the Red Team seems to have more soldiers in it than the other teams do. Wow, that's what you call overanalyzing a story. :D oh well, I get into Lyle's stories alot so...I just wish he'd let me know what's gonna happen every now and then...so I wouldn't have to wait for you to post it here all the time. Anyways, I like where you're going with this, Lyle. Keep it up.

long message there and i just come back from dentists so my faces is still numb

Wow, that was...amazing. I thought I'd heard enough when talking to you after school today but after reading that...I'm impressed that I could make you think (no pun intended) that much about something. IRT Cube- What did you go to the dentist's for? Back to JC- I'm glad you like the Silvers. I like them as well. Although I must admit that I prefer the Blues to them. I'm trying to figure out what I'm gonna do about Manny and Big Ern. I myself am not sure if they're gonna be officially dead or not in the next episode for Blood Gulch. Cuz apart from a few slight details such as the teleporter event, which I had planned to happen right from when I wrote the first episode, I hardly ever have an actual plan on what I'm gonna do next in RvBvSvG. That's why I always have things happen that can have many different outcomes such as the Reds going to Green Base in Sidewinder, the prisoner at Blue Base for Sidewinder, the teleporter for Blood Gulch, and the unofficial deaths of Manny and Big Ern in Blood Gulch. So as you can tell, I always have lots of options open for speculation and elaboration, which makes a story much more fun for me to write, and much more fun (at least, I hope so) for the readers. It's funny that you'd say Silver is your fave team, cuz so far, they're the ones that have been least involved with the main plots. But I'm planning on getting Silvers more involved in Sidewinder with Petersen and Marlene's relationship. And in Blood Gulch, the unofficial deaths of Manny and Big Ern have done enough for now to make Silver part of the storyline. Look for them to be more involved in the future tho... you've hit the spot on the Blues at Sidewinder. I didn't originally intend for Vash and Wilkes to be like Grif and Simmons, it just kinda happened. And I felt that if Shawn and Pvt. Potter had tension between them, then Wilkes and Vash shouldn't be deprived of the same opportunity. Besides, when I wrote the part about Morris not knowing that Vash existed, I definitely felt that Vash would be the perfect Grif type of character. Mind you, Wilkes and Vash are different than Grif and Simmons so... Anyways, I've compiled a list of important characters to the plot so far...and characters that will most likely become more involved as well. Important Characters: (BG stands for Blood Gulch, S stands for Sidewinder) Fred & Sam (Blue BG?) Jessica (Green BG) Nick (Silver BG) Gina (Red BG?) Petersen (Silver S) Polowski (Silver S) Murphy (Red S) Morris (Blue S) unnamed prisoner (Green S) Criddle (Neutral S?) Marlene (Neutral S) keep in mind that this list will DEFINITELY expand as time passes in RvBvSvG...

3 blue 2 of red, silver, green, and neutral on the list. Well, I like Blue more than neutral, red, and green so I like how they're more involved with the plot than those. Silver, I don't mind that they're not involved as much cuz I like it that way.

tooth cavity/regular check up o a medical officer on the neutral team like Omaily (good) no like spilt personallyty that really is hard for the vids

Are you referring to Criddle about the Neutral medic thing? Cuz he's not a medic, he's just a freelancer...kinda like Tex. And Marlene works at the store, although a medic would be nice to have, maybe I can somehow get Marlene involved as a medic...

thx i have a medic guy on the vids and she need a job

so you've already done work on some of the vids :?: